I'm glad you shared examples of how information can be presented. The "Good Example" details the topic simply and effectively in a conversational tone, ideal for an engaging article. The use of a header in the "Bad Example," while informative, might be viewed as redundant when immediately followed by similar content, which could lead to repetitiveness in the text.
If there is a specific format or additional details you would like to see, feel free to share more information, and I can modify or create content to suit those needs!